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His presence was so unbearable. Kaname Kuran, a vampire. Sometimes I thought that he was too good for me. His tall, hot, charming looks made me feel all weird and tingly inside. Daily, I would stare at him, longing to touch him all over. I, Zero Kiryuu, am in love. I was also wanted the impossible. Or so I thought.

One day, while I was on duty as part of the Disciplinary Committee, he was walking alone on the sidewalk. I could hear his footsteps as he came closer. "Zero. I need to talk to you. Come to my room please." I agreed, and silently followed him to his room.

As we entered, I walked in, and sat down on his chair. He turned, and closed the door slowly. I got nervous. Here I was, ALONE with him, in his room. He took off his jacket, and tossed it on his bed. "What did you want to talk about?" I asked, trying to hide the nervousness in my voice. "I think you know." he replied. He knows. I know it.

"I've noticed you staring at me." he said. Shit. I was right. He DID know. "If you are ready, I am too. Don't worry, I've had the same feelings too," he confessed. He took off his shirt. I couldn't resist. He had a perfect 6-pack, tempting me to run my hands over them. "Really?" I asked, making sure it wasn't a gimmick. "Yes. Do you want to?" he replied. "Yes" I Said, so eager, it came out almost as a whisper. He came closer to me, and his small, pinkish , smooth lips gently came to mine, and we kissed.

I opened my mouth a little bit to let Kaname's tongue in. He followed, and I entered my tongue into his. I soothed his tongue, and brushed my tongue against his sides in his mouth. I started to feel hot and tingly,completely overwhelmed by pleasure. I got really warm, and took of my jacket, vest, and shirt. Kaname's toung was licking me all over now. "I-It feels so.....GOOD." I said aloud. I gave his shoulder a tight squeeze.

He started gently kissing my neck, gently, and smoothly. Then he started sucking, and biting. It felt so powerful. I almost thought sins could be the answer to everything. HIM as my answer to everything. I wanted MORE. He nibbled on my nipple, and I could almost barely stand it. I panted and moaned.

I found myself squeezing Kaname. He was ready. We both finished undressing. He stuck one finger in me, and it felt good, but uncomfortable. He stuck another one in. It felt so great. I then thought, he was teasing me a little."Kaname. I cannot wait any longer. Come in." I said. He did. I could feel it enter, and I yelped. I wanted more of him. MORE. He swiveled, turned, and pulled out. Then he came back in. I felt lie I was going to pass out from too much pleasure. It felt AMAZING.

After we were done, we just lied there. "Thank you. I now feel complete with you Kaname-Sama." I Said. I Felt Exhausted. Together, we interlocked fingers, and fell asleep.


                                                                                THE END!!! =D ^.^

Note; This Is My FIRST EVER Yaoi. I Have Recently Discovered It Due To An Awesome German Friend. =] She ROCKS. lmfao. I Just Wrote This Last Night. I Have Been A Yaoi Fan Ever Since About 2 Weeks Ago. YAY!!! x]] More Stories To Come Soon! Any Requests? ;o <33
x]] This Is My First YAOI!!!
Hope You Like! ^.^
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lolitanguyen1704 Featured By Owner Jul 1, 2014  New member
The bestest I ever read. More about zero x kaname please, and a little longer please ^_^
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miyuyamano56 Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
the best Yaoi ever. you should make another one and make it more intimate.
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bri-the-dino Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm working on other things at the moment, but as soon as I get the chance, I'll work on one. Thanks! :3
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miyuyamano56 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
YAY!!!!!!! I feel all tingly inside<3.
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SpiderQueenBee37 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
and thus the yaoi cult gains another proud member. XD welcome haha good work too.
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bri-the-dino Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL. Ahaha. xD Your comment made my night. :3
And thank you. ^-^
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SpiderQueenBee37 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
you are very welcome. im glad something i said brightened someone elses day lol XD
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sharkbabe1224 Featured By Owner May 9, 2011
it was alright, you need to put a little more detail into it though, try to not repeat so much as well... XP other than that i love image i was getting in my head
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bri-the-dino Featured By Owner May 9, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
;o dankeee. ^-^
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Riihawilliams Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
no matter how may times i read this, my heart will still race
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